The arm spinning on McGregor was choppy and kinda threw me off. The humor was minimal and this animation is more of a stinging critique of the sport as well as Mayweather.
Good job overall, was just hoping for a bit more PUNCH in the jokes. See? This is what happens when you leave me to write them- they're worse. Do you really want more of THIS?
The animation was pretty fluid for what it was but the beat was an obvious tossaway gag that didn't stick. I understand the message but I've heard it before- not taking this seriously but I expected as little more as I enjoyed your nonsensical fun back in the day.
Good to see you back but I know you can do better. Hope to see more of you around here.
The joke in essence was good, but the execution was awful. I understand it's kind of a shitpost cartoon but you can't get away with it when you have a good joke. That's like blueballing me, bro.
Yeah, I agree with you there, the execution was awful, and to be fair i wasn't intending on it to be a shitpost but because of the intentionally awful background music and accidental animation errors, i can see why you thought it fell under the shitpost category. I need to improve my production on things.
Honestly though, I will heed your advice for next time
It's catchy and easy on the ears but you can certainly make better lyrics then this. It's a Valentines song and you didn't make it the least bit cheeky.
Post-It: Stab this later
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